debate1 Posted February 6, 2021 Share Posted February 6, 2021 Oz needs to win. 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jsmith230 Posted February 6, 2021 Share Posted February 6, 2021 Rory is definitely good at pitting these roommates against each other as an incentive to grow. Devious! I love how competitive Oz and Grif are, and I can already tell this is shaping up to be another incredible @dredlifter classic! Excited for the next chapter! Keep up the great work — and THANK YOU! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gman34 Posted February 7, 2021 Share Posted February 7, 2021 Cannot wait to see the next chapters in this. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasperGhost Posted February 7, 2021 Share Posted February 7, 2021 I don't want to be picky but you need to make sure you keep the names right. In this chapter you kept calling Oz Grif. Other than that great story and can hardly wait to see what happens next. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cregssatx Posted February 7, 2021 Share Posted February 7, 2021 @dredlifter, there's so much potential here. I can't wait to see where you take it! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dredlifter Posted February 7, 2021 Author Share Posted February 7, 2021 2 hours ago, JasperGhost said: I don't want to be picky but you need to make sure you keep the names right. In this chapter you kept calling Oz Grif. Other than that great story and can hardly wait to see what happens next. My bad. I'll re-read it and edit it tomorrow. Thanks for pointing this out. Conversation with three people are difficult to keep track of. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve01 Posted February 7, 2021 Share Posted February 7, 2021 Great story so far. I started going to the gym 3 weeks ago, wish I had Oz's gains 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adonis21 Posted February 8, 2021 Share Posted February 8, 2021 Will they start growing in... other ways? 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasperGhost Posted February 8, 2021 Share Posted February 8, 2021 20 hours ago, dredlifter said: My bad. I'll re-read it and edit it tomorrow. Thanks for pointing this out. Conversation with three people are difficult to keep track of. You're welcome and I agree. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamaswami Posted February 8, 2021 Share Posted February 8, 2021 Great story, can’t wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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